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Kruelty
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K I was just noble king of my village, Whale Tooth, on Earthrealm. The
R day Onaga was killed, his heart was used to summon Shao Kahn; former
U emperor of Outworld. He was angry, and by showing it, sent his whole
E army to exterminate Earthrealm. One of the villages on his list was
L my Empire. Shao Kahn knew my father, I was abandoned as a baby so I
T had never known of my family or even my ethnicity. He hated my father
Y so he went for me. I fought back at the tarkatans with their foul
stench but Shao Kahn charged for my family. I went inbetween her and
Kahn's hammer and he smashed my chest with all force as I watched my
splatter all over the ground. He summoned a portal and escaped with
my wife. As Rain was about to jump in the portal, he felt mercy and
said "I remember" and left. The warriors of Earthrealm came and
fought back. Scorpion came up to my dying body and I watched the
strangest thing, my blood was floating in the air like bubbles. The
last thing I heard was "No" from Scorpion. I woke up in the
Netherealm but as something different, I wasn't human anymore. My
father was a demon?
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Date Posted:
10/21/05 6:07pm
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RE: Can this be a cool character? or even awesome? or does it suck?
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... Something was planned, I was meant to die, someone knew what I was and set me up. I was there with a Chinese spear and my father's katana which I promised I won't use it until the right moment. It's still in it's Shieft and will remain there. I went to the Netherealm because I was a demon, now I understand. I escaped the Netherealm and headed for Outworld but ended up at Chaosrealm. I met Havik and he told me his problems about the pathetic Seidan guardsmen. I had to do something because he trained me so I travelled to Orderrealm.
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10/21/05 6:11pm
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... the guards of Seido attacked me from behind because they knew about my alliance with Havik. A clan, "the resistance" fought the Seidan guardsmen. They thought I was evil so they attacked me aswell until I told them of all the confusion. I met Darrius. He said "A man started all this mess, his name is Hotaru, he was the root of Order. He asked me to add it to his list of deaths. I accepted that when Hotaru and I cross paths, it won't be pretty.
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10/21/05 6:16pm
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... I saw an old man, I followed him to Edenia. I heard from Princess Kitana that he saved the realms. Then Onaga broke loose then the Champion of the Elder Gods, Scorpion, got rid of this threat. Onaga tricked Shujinko into thinking that he was the Champion of the Elder Gods but Scorpion was the true champion. I should continue and find Shao Kahn.
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10/21/05 6:19pm
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... I went to Outworld, typical tarkatans trying to prove their strength came up to me but they were of no consequence. I killed them all without regret. I continued to the Living Forest and I saw a dead man split in half by a katana. I identified the body and it was infact Hotaru. I saw a palace in Outworld but it can't be of the Deadly Alliance. It was destroyed from Raiden's sacrifice.
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Date Posted:
10/21/05 6:21pm
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...I continued to the palace, I smelled something rotten, it was Onaga's heart used to regenerate all evil. I saw my men, they bowed before me, they still know me even with a different appearence. I saw Shao Kahn married to my wife, a sorceress. She set me up because she knew of my origin as I was a threat. But she didn't know that I would come back. I stepped towards the palace.
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Date Posted:
10/21/05 6:28pm
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... Final battle, I saw every champion and every adversary. Rain came to me and told me he "I was taken as a child and raised to be evil. He fed my family to the tarkatans. Your demise helped me remember." I said that we shall fight. My son, an enemy. I went forth to kill my wife, Krosilus, and we fought. Shao Kahn and my son fought me as well. Scorpion sliced my son into pieces... Shao Kahn ran away as usual. With all my scars, I pulled out my father's katana and sliced Krosilus in half. With all my wounds I was gone. They gave me a proper funeral and will remember my name...
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Date Posted:
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you should put this in all the character creation threads, not future mk threads. at least not yet.
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k... what do u think of the character?
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Date Posted:
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its cool.
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That's pretty good. The story's a little confuzzling, but the overall idea is great. ^_^
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Date Posted:
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It's pretty cool.
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10/23/05 2:19am
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i didnt read what u wrote kruelty but the character seems really good. maybe you might be working with midway on the next mk. hopefully, cause fans like us can come up with really smart ideas.
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Date Posted:
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Kruelty posted:
if u ever played diablo the boss is a dragon and sorta looks like him anyways he is cool
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